When I die
please don’t say I’ve passed away
or gone to heaven. Instead,
I’ll hope that you will simply say
You might say that I lived life well,
there were some ups and downs. I tried
to do my best, had fun with family and friends
but in the end, I died.
Please don’t suggest I’m somewhere in the sky
looking down on kith and kin. I’m sure
you wouldn’t really like that! Just accept
that I am here no more.
I hope that you remember me sometimes,
think of me kindly, memories don’t spoil.
But please don’t use some flowery euphemistic words —
I really have not stepped off this mortal coil.
Tonnie Richmond is retired and is interested in archaeology and poetry. These days she finds writing poetry easier than digging. She has had several poems published by Dreich, Yaffle and others.
3 thoughts on “When I Die, by Tonnie Richmond”
I really like this poem and wholeheartedly agree with the message behind it! ‘Shuffle off’ would be more accurate than ‘stepped off’ though.
Tonnie Richmond says
Thank you! Yes, you are right about “shuffled”.
Dora Wright says
Very nice…. like the sentiments